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Thursday, April 23, 2015

Blog Post #3

I think most exciting/interesting part so far is when Jeffrey had the fever and had to be rushed to the hospital. It might sound weird on how I think the most exciting is because you are kind of on your toes the whole chapter. Such as, when Steven is at the school dance and all of the sudden his mom rushed with Jeffrey, who was covered in sweat. Another part is when Steven is playing drums and he looks up to he his dad, who hasn't talked to Steven in awhile, watching him play. This might be the anxious part so far in the book!

1 comment:

  1. I think that it is great that you have picked up on some of the significant rising action events rather than the big "hey he has cancer" bit at the beginning... this shows that you could be a great writer!

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